Task Description:
Today we were makeing Hiaku Who am I Poem As you can see this is my Haiku Who am I Poem did you know the that they are Japanese type of poetry I was really happy to make it I was doing iut like it was the last thing I do I really like my poem I also hope you like my Poem to.
Hi Faiva. Nice blogging just a few mistakes.
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Fakalofa Atu Faiva i like the way you used describing words to explain your poem.thank you for doing that now I’ve learnt a lot from you thanks.Have you posted another one of your haiku poems.What was your favorite part in your haiku poem.
Kia ora Faiva. This beautiful Haiku made me smile. I had fun trying to guess your ‘who am I?’ Haiku and thought that choosing an emotion was a unique idea! Well Done.
I enjoyed learning that this poetry style is from Japan. How cool!
Do you think there is a way you can improve your blog post message? I would love to see some more punctuation to help your writing flow.
I’m glad you enjoyed writing your “Who am I?” Haiku.